Thursday, July 23, 2009

DO U FEEL THIS WAY UR STUCK


OK FOR MY SUMMER BRIDGE CLASS THIS IS A POEM SORT OF LIKE A STORY ABOUT THIS BOY THAT IM IN LOVE WITH BUT HE HAS NO FEELINGS N HE LIED ABOUT SOMTHING SOOO I WROTE THIS.. BECUZ THIS WAS HOW I FELT AT THE TIME.... HE WAS STUCK... N DIDNT NO A WAY OUT.... BUT I WROTE THIS A LONG TIME AGO.... BUT NOW HES IN THE ARMY...



DO U FEEL THIS WAY (UR STUCK)

Wednesday, November 5, 2008 at 5:50pm Edit Note Delete
IF YOU PLAY WITH FIRE 99.9% OF THE TIME YOU'LL GET BURNT THE OTHER 1% U MIGHT NOT. you say ur done with this whole thing. but yet you keep trying to fight fire with heat. why go back to ur pass when its a whole future ahead of you. like TI AND RIHANNA SAID.. JUST LIVE YOUR LIFE AND COUNT PAPER. ive been lied to so many times so what u say to me dont mean a thing. i jus want to wake up and say it was all a dream. your stuck in this world of ur own and you really had no place to call home. you act as if every day the the world pass you by. but you really no the reason why. deep down inside you feels its your fault but it really dont matter because its only a thought. u had a mom n a dad that wasent there for you. You need a girl n ur life that would care for you. but u turn down the good things for the bad..... BUT I GOT 1 QUESTION WHY AM I SO MAD??????????




but as i sit in wonder how could this b. ur a undercover lier and u lied to me. i reminise on the times you spent with me. n i dont understand y u spent it with me. its like a movie that keeps playing over in over in my mind (flick,flick) i wish i could rewind the time.i hate that i meet you i really regret you. thats cold how you could look i n my eyes and lie.. but as the sain say. REAL EYES REALIZE REAL LIES. but i was just to blind to see all the pain you were causing me. but as Rihanna would say.....AND THEE AWARDS FOR THE BEST LIES GOES TO YOU. GIVE YOUR SELF AROUND OF APPLAUSE U WON THE STaNDERD OVATION. GO ON TAKE A BOW...... t


his is somthing that i was thinkingt about a couple of days ago.so i jus had to rite it... i kilt



4 comments:

  1. that shit raw i like that real eye realize real lies

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  2. LOL U SILLY YEA I KNOW.. AND THANKS... I DONT NO Y I DONT WANNA BECOME A POET.. IN I CAN WRITE.. BUT I GUESS THATS JUST A GIFT I HAVE....

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  3. gurl i likes so feel you men just cheat sumtimes cause there stuck and dont kno how to get out of a relationship they dont want to be in why cant they just say "HEY I DONT WANT TO BE WITH YOU ANYMORE"

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  4. LOL... YEA IT WASENT SORT OF LIKE HE WAS CHEATING.... HE JUS LIED TO HIS GURLFRIEND ABOUT SOMETHING... N I DIDNT LIKE IT.. BUT YEA HES HOME NOW... BUT WERE JUST FRIENDS... WEVE BEEN FRIENDS.... BUT YEA Y DO THEY HAVE TO LEAVE

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